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By kennethcook on 07/04/2012
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I love this piece 

Written by Red Roses and Wine  (7/23/2012 1:58:34 PM)

I love the ambiguity of it very much.

Oh Sh#t! 

Written by Mr.Tibbs  (7/26/2012 4:10:14 PM)

Wow, uh, I love the imagery. I love the fact that the entire poem had me going. it actually made me believe that you were so inlove and that you had thee very best until the very last line. I really you make a part two or some sort of continuation that explores more into the lie.
Good job


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Written by kennethcook  (7/26/2012 8:07:58 PM)

@Mr. Tibbs: Thank you for the great review, but there will be no 'sequel' poem, because it's the 'twist' ending (last line) that is meant to be the 'cap' on the poem... That's all there is to it, my friend... The 'cap' finishes it! 8-)

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