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Without You
By kennethcook on 08/03/2012
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love song 

Written by EmptyBamboo  (9/26/2012 12:49:30 AM)

I found it expressive.
Maybe, it would sound even more dramatically with two last stanzas placed in the beginning, to keep the emotional flow increase.
However, it is only my personal perception.
Thank you,

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