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To Know The Love I Give
By rayne on 08/31/2012
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Written by khushi  (9/2/2012 5:48:35 AM)

i like your poem....very visual......compact...nice rhymes:)

sorry about the hurt:(

 


Written by I_bleed_fire  (9/4/2012 10:44:47 AM)

Awesome poem! It's very deep, and fortunately/unfortunately I can relate to this a lot. (also, second to last stanza, correct me if I'm wrong, but I think you meant "love" instead of "live" if not, I apologize)

Thanks for the feed back 

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Written by rayne  (9/15/2012 1:29:30 PM)

You were right I meant love, thank you both for your feedback. This poem was very dear to me, I am not very good about talking through my feelings. The words always seem to fail when they get to my lips, but when I type it's like my pain and love just flow from my fingertips and i feel so much better.

nice 


Written by prpapi1978  (3/3/2013 4:58:31 AM)

you still on here>>> look me up prpapi1978 we used to chat all the time you had good input in my stuff as i did on urs


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