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Gift To The Empty Night
By kennethcook on 09/05/2012
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Written by standrkm  (9/16/2012 6:33:59 PM)

great stuff as always however I felt with the sun shining suddenly that the poem would have been better with a little more of a struggle through some sort of dark and freezing cave you stumble through as you're welcomed by the warmth sun, but it's still great

 

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Written by kennethcook  (9/16/2012 8:00:06 PM)

Thank you for the review. The poem is metaphorical. It is symbolic of a relationship that literally happened suddenly. I was not looking, nor was I 'struggling', hence the use of the word "suddenly", for indeed, that is exactly how it happened. 8-)

 

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Written by standrkm  (9/16/2012 9:00:50 PM)

haha for a minute there I really did picture the sunshine as a blonde haired woman, great to hear, the deeper the better


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