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By girlbrie on 09/24/2012
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Written by mariah  (9/24/2012 6:57:52 AM)

I have to say at first read I didn't really care for this one. But after reading it again I had a change of opinion. It's actually quite good.( Being a rhymer those are the type I usually like the most.) Take my a comment with a grain of salt, that being said if I were to edit this I would concentrate on just the last few lines. the rest seems to flow really well for me. Thanks for the read. ; }


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