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cant u aee
By tiffanybabcock on 03/04/2013
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Written by dawolfie  (3/11/2013 9:41:39 PM)

I can totally relate, not the wife part, but the other half part. Communication can be such a difficult thing between husbands and wives.

BTW, I think the title is missing an "s".

 

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Written by kennethcook  (4/1/2013 8:01:30 AM)

A good poem, in my opinion. Lots of feeling and emotion. I would suggest, however, that you rework the piece a little, paying closer attention to spelling (particularly in the title), as well as the syntax (structure/wording). It's a good poem, and with a bit of rework, it has the potential of being a great one! 8-)

 


Written by kennethcook  (4/1/2013 8:02:25 AM)



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