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Late Night Wisdom? (Please critique, I have no idea if I'm any good or not)
By OkieSnail on 03/10/2013
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Written by kennethcook  (3/24/2013 8:28:20 AM)

More than happy to critique this piece: Very impressive, with a well structured wording, and great illustrative, emotive language. Your imagery works well to help drive home the theme. I'd like to offer one personal criticism, if I my (purely my opinion): Perhaps you might consider condensing the poem a bit, to make it more concise, and to the point... Just a thought... This does not in any way take away from the fact that you've created an excellent piece of writing... By the way, yes, you are definitely a good writer! 8-)


Written by kennethcook  (3/24/2013 8:28:58 AM)

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