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Fallen
By dheekhaye on 04/25/2013
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Written by DrummerRic74  (5/1/2013 12:55:39 PM)

Sweet write! I can relate to this...♫

 

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Written by kennethcook  (5/6/2013 8:09:38 PM)

A great piece of writing. I would like to offer one piece of advice, however: Please watch your grammatical syntax, as this can deter from the poem's impact on the reader. There is no denying it, though: The piece is quite powerful, and packed with lots of feeling, emotive language, and graphic imagery. Good job! 8-)

 


Written by kennethcook  (5/6/2013 8:10:51 PM)



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