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The Reality of the Morning
By kennethcook on 04/26/2013
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the reality of the morning 

Written by ljs  (4/26/2013 4:41:05 PM)

quite a lot of feelings in your poem kind of sad
to read keep writing yes the reality of the
morning can hit one right between the eyes
I can relate

The Reality of The Morning 

Written by Monterey  (4/27/2013 7:33:44 AM)

I absolutely love your poetry and the deive phrasing you use, but on this one the adjectives felt quite excessive. I got bogged down by them and had to read it a few times to pick out the meat and meaning of the poem. The reality of the morning is harsh and blunt and quick and for this poem to really reflect that it should be more sparse with each word counting and punching the reader (so to speak)


Written by Mr.Tibbs  (4/28/2013 3:07:59 PM)

I really like this poem. It spoke to me. About half way into it all I could was go "Hm" lol

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