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By dheekhaye on 05/06/2013
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Written by fred1932  (5/6/2013 10:25:55 PM)

Thanks for your comments on Shell Talk To Me Later. Truthfully, Im still working on that, surprised that someone commented on that. Im trying to make it flow smoother. Now you, as in your poem. Its nice, I like it even though I myself wouldve written it this way
From the day we met
I loved you
The moment our eyes embraced
I loved you more

Thats me because youre working to the point of your growing love for the individual as if its leading to something lasting forever.

 

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Written by fred1932  (5/6/2013 10:26:17 PM)

Thanks for your comments on Shell Talk To Me Later. Truthfully, Im still working on that, surprised that someone commented on that. Im trying to make it flow smoother. Now you, as in your poem. Its nice, I like it even though I myself wouldve written it this way
From the day we met
I loved you
The moment our eyes embraced
I loved you more

Thats me because youre working to the point of your growing love for the individual as if its leading to something lasting forever.

heart felt poem.. 


Written by AusaraMoon  (5/9/2013 4:49:47 PM)

Very beautiful and simply written..

~Ausara Moon


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