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MYSTERY MAN
By robinkeanna on 05/07/2013
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Good poem 


Written by Tsmiles  (5/8/2013 12:28:26 AM)

I enjoyed reading the concept of darkness blinding the light as beauty and felt that "his talliness reaches my heart in height" was fun to read. The slang, however, made it a little difficult to read, but it was interesting to see how you used the slang to portray your message

hi 

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Written by dheekhaye  (5/8/2013 1:44:50 AM)

I SECRETLY FOLLOWS HIM.

I SECRETLY FOLLOW HIM.- subject verb agreement.

good write
keep writing

God bless


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