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By robinkeanna on 05/23/2013
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Written by kennethcook  (12/10/2013 7:38:21 AM)

This poem has a lot of potential. It has a strong theme and good syntax. I'd like to offer a little constructive criticism: The all capital letters connote a "shouting" format, which doesn't appear to be what you were attempting to convey. Also, some of your spelling, grammar and wording in general need adjusting, in order to create a more professional appearance to the piece. Please understand that these are merely suggestions based on my personal opinion. Keep writing. 8-)


Written by kennethcook  (12/10/2013 7:38:44 AM)

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