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searching for that something i.ll never find
By silentswriter on 05/24/2013
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Written by kennethcook  (5/29/2013 8:47:50 AM)

Great poem: Lots of good imagery. The emotion and feeling really shines through! I'd like to offer one suggestion, however: Please watch your spelling, grammar, and punctuation.

 


Written by kennethcook  (5/29/2013 8:48:33 AM)


spelling and gramma 

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Written by silentswriter  (5/29/2013 8:55:49 AM)

My mistakes are made as i have no pc or laptop im doing all my work fresh off the phone sorry if you cant look past a few typos or errors. Ive got bigger problems in my life then spelling mistakes no i didnt go to school or had a educational up bringing like most so its either read and look past the mistakes or just dont read at all simple

 


Written by sailboat  (5/30/2013 4:55:19 PM)

A nice effert, but difficult to follow.

Are you suggesting to Kenny that there is no education system in the UK? I woud find that hard to believe.

I like but... 


Written by Mr.Tibbs  (6/4/2013 9:26:45 AM)

I really like this poem, my only gripe is that, because it lacks punctuation, it makes it a little difficult to read. Other than that, very good.


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