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By robinkeanna on 07/31/2013
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if i may be blunt. . . 

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Written by Morgan90210  (7/31/2013 9:28:08 PM)

your poem is good,
it can be better,
if only you rewrite some glaring errors,

SOMETIMES I DON'T KNOW HOW
I'M FEELING FOR YOU,
sometimes don't know how i feel about you,
sometimes i don't know, if i feel for you?
SOUNDS BETTER?

I'M HOPELESS DEVOTED TO YOU,
hopelessly devoted to you

YOU ALL I THINK ABOUT,
you're / you are all i think about,

that will surely make your poem,
much more impactful with the effects
you are playing about. . . .

please forgive me for my blunt review
but i expect the same from others too.
your well wisher .

COOL 


Written by robinkeanna  (9/22/2013 7:00:35 PM)

THUMBS UP


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