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By youcallmealice on 10/01/2013
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Written by kennethcook  (10/2/2013 6:21:55 AM)

Good job: Well structured and highly imaginative. You communicate your message and emotions well, with lots of great imagery ensconced in a nice syntax.
I have one suggestion: It's my personal opinion that the piece is rather "lengthy". Perhaps it could be consolidated somewhat, thus creating a more concise poem. This does not detract from the quality of the work, however. You did a great job! 8-)


Written by kennethcook  (10/2/2013 6:22:25 AM)

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