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Man of Dirt (Woman of Steel)
By kennethcook on 02/12/2014
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Written by deadmanseeking  (2/13/2014 5:04:19 PM)


Too powerful?? 


Written by JdSchooley  (2/13/2014 5:07:47 PM)

A brutal perspective which I can identify with...

Your placement of vital aspects of this work are set like awkwardly selected stones in a slightly weak wall. I am thinking while the message is string, it is missing a little of the mortar that helps to set the objects with solid proficiency. Think about breaking up the heavier elements with some cadenced diametrics to give this a little variation....Jd

 


Written by KendraBurnett19  (2/28/2014 10:52:23 AM)


Man of Dirt (Woman of Steel) 


Written by mrwrite53  (4/10/2014 12:27:01 AM)

I think a lot of men in general can relate to this. It's very realistic, and I can feel the pain of the man in this poem. Very strong.


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