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What Love Is
By mrwrite53 on 07/06/2014
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Written by JdSchooley  (8/4/2015 2:31:43 PM)

I would think this is a much better poem than the phrasing allows, you may consider arranging it for the pace of the reader??.........Jd

What Love Is 


Written by Ianthepoet  (8/8/2015 11:05:43 PM)

I agree with JD, perhaps consider the rephrasing. What you are expressing is a lovely and wonderful feeling, yet it feels a little choppy, that's ok, just rearrange a bit - love is the most wonderful emotion! Peace - Ian

hard to get 


Written by javajoe  (9/12/2015 2:57:37 AM)

Love is elusive. You just know it.

 

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Written by kalyanbuzz  (9/16/2015 2:17:37 AM)

Belongs to greetings card poetry genre!


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