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The Letter I never finished.
By Andydon on 02/12/2017
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Written by deadmanseeking  (2/12/2017 1:33:46 PM)

A unique piece with 3 ironic twists. The first twist I saw was the self condemnation with several clever uck rhimes for failure. Cool. Twist 2 was parts of the original work which had new images of a common admiration theme. My favorite was cuddly vixen, which captures the mystery of woman for man. And the final twist at the end for her to finish what you didn`t want to. Excellent work! thx.


Written by lanawrites  (2/20/2017 2:20:52 AM)

I personally can relate to this poem, which might be why I enjoyed reading it so much. It all flows together and is intertwined with the pain of feeling love and wanting to be loved in return. Everyone has different ways and ideas about how love should be expressed, and sometimes it is difficult to find words that describe how we feel about someone. Thank you for writing a relatable poem.


Written by marychristeta  (3/8/2017 4:59:43 AM)

I was at first bothered by your use of commas at the beginning, but the romantic in me decided to let grammar slide and I thoroughly enjoyed the license you took with this. Although heartbreaking, this is so genuine and free and I love the ways you make words into feelings. Bravo to rhyme "vixen" with "unfixing," because it worked even though it shouldn't have.

Love this.

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