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Tease me like you mean it
By wordsnnoise on 06/06/2005
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Written by spencer  (6/9/2005 6:03:38 PM)

wounderful words... like this version better than the first, yet they mean two different things-kind of like a series-a painting of the same thing from different perspectives this version is just wounderous and wounderful


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Written by duchess  (6/10/2005 2:33:50 AM)

something tells me, you like it. good job rhyming without much schmaltz. d ~


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Written by wordsnnoise  (6/12/2005 5:31:28 AM)

Really appreciate the feedback, have only started writing real poetry this year, will continue now!


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Written by William Benoit  (6/15/2005 1:39:11 AM)

You did a good job of sticking to your rhyme scheme, and the words flowed very well. I, personaly have always had a dislike for the word "get", but to put recieve would have thown your tempo off, and I can think of nothing else to use in that part of your piece. Over all, it was excellent, and I can't wait to read more of your poetry, my noisy friend.


Written by Biggus  (1/8/2008 5:13:24 AM)


Written by wordgigolo  (1/10/2008 4:35:53 AM)

Very sexy and seductive...

i love it! 

Written by the_final_act  (1/10/2008 11:35:00 PM)

So cute, so, so perfect for my current situation. I wish I could write more, so it looks like I really mean it, but I cant thing of anything else to call it. Kudos!

i liked it 

Written by bookergirl04  (3/9/2008 1:05:26 PM)

i just started writing poetry this year too. ur way better at it then i am already

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