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from far away
By duchess on 06/10/2005
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Reviews: 38


Written by Monfish  (3/2/2008 7:38:56 PM)

skills, great write

Very good 

Written by Highseas  (3/6/2008 3:37:09 PM)

gee is it only us poets who see love and can write about it.............Very well done


Written by KellyIsHere  (4/2/2008 3:38:23 PM)


Written by Addiction  (4/10/2008 11:53:50 PM)

very deep. i loved it.


Written by snakemoney7  (4/14/2008 1:59:34 PM)

You know 

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Written by Scout  (4/15/2008 6:09:55 PM)

this truly is

a classic poem.

Rereading it gave me goosebumps

Good Job! 

Written by jporter188  (5/16/2008 9:40:37 PM)

Nice writing...

I liked the strong image in this line:

rub your face when i leave your sight.

Maybe it's just me, but I didn't see the connection with the title "from far away".

from far way 

Written by nsaynne  (7/10/2008 10:17:41 AM)

I liked this very much. A couple of nit-picky things I might look at changing: "it could be just me" - reads a bit awkwardly, at least aloud, I wonder if "it could just be me" might flow a little more smoothly (or does that change the intent too much?) The only other thing was "sliver of moon" - while perfect, sounded a bit cliche to me. I tried to think of another word that you might use instead of sliver and came up with "splinter", which I like but which may not suit you at all...just some thoughts - to use or not use, as you wish. nsaynne

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