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By sharoneliz on 06/10/2005
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Written by mysticshygirl  (6/11/2005 5:02:11 PM)

I am very fond of the extended metaphor.


Written by Biggus  (12/13/2007 9:31:45 AM)

very deep 

Written by L  (1/6/2009 12:58:18 AM)

i am in the same boat being thrown to and fro but hopefully me as well as you an yours will give it another go if it is love very nice write


Written by BeautifulLiving0813  (1/11/2009 1:03:41 PM)

This is truely a wonderful piece of work.
Beatifuly written. So sad, yet true at times.
Congrats of all your hard work!


Written by Unknown Member  (1/11/2009 3:33:57 PM)

This poem is so tragic yet so lovely.

Fave Stanza:

"When she becomes enraged her turbulent waves splash from great highs.
Perhaps it is time to walk away. Time to say our last goodbye"


Written by Parker  (1/12/2009 1:23:28 PM)

Simple Greatness 

Written by dsgb0333  (1/14/2009 2:05:32 PM)

Beautiful Poem.....I think i have a writing style like you

Yess.... yes 

Written by semi_psychiatrist  (1/16/2009 2:00:30 AM)

It brings up a lot of memories for me which is kinda the point. I really like the extended metaphor in this format, nicely done


Written by A.Lynn  (1/21/2009 1:27:54 AM)

this amazingly good.
i like your imagery. its amazing.


Written by JJLento626  (1/22/2009 5:42:34 PM)

This metaphor is very true and intellegent. I've also compared love to the sea in my writings at times but never made a whole poem about it. This is very well done.

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