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Sweet Roses
By just me on 08/07/2005
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Ok, this poem belongs here. 

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Written by MikeC16958  (8/7/2005 11:09:06 PM)

It a warm beautiful sentiment. But as badly as I typo I still find it necessary to point it out to folks here (as I hope you all will for me also). It's typical and happens frequently. to / too. Lovely sentiments of unrequited love. Good effort! Peace and keep reading and writing!


Written by rockia  (8/8/2005 4:01:52 PM)

I like this its soft its gentle, its full of expression


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Written by just me  (8/18/2005 6:16:49 PM)

I'm glad you guys took the time to read/review my poem. thanks!!

Angst abounds! 

Written by sonataincminor  (8/19/2005 7:14:31 AM)

This is good work. You capture that 'love unknown' extremely well. Line 8 might sound better without the 'It's', and the last line, think about 'he' or 'she' (making no assumptions. lol) instead of 'they'. Makes the poem more direct. You need some periods to set individual thoughts off. This is a good poem. Thank you for sharing it.

enjoyed it! 

Written by jewel  (8/21/2005 7:17:50 AM)

sad but beautiful....you capture the image of an requited love beautifully...well done


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Written by just me  (8/29/2005 6:38:30 PM)

I'm in awe that you guys all like this, I wrote this poem awhile back before I even started reading and learning more about poetry. I wrote it on a whim, thanks for the ratings and reviews, keep 'em coming :)


Written by Biggus  (12/21/2007 6:22:40 AM)

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