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Emotional Penetration
By wickedhart on 08/16/2005
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Another fine bit of writing 


Written by sonataincminor  (8/19/2005 7:33:37 AM)

Like the images you paint in this. And the repetition. What strikes me about this poem is that each stanza starts with 'I', but it isn't really about the 'I', it's about 'you'. Stanzas are constructed well, thoughts conveyed well. Very good work!!

nice 


Written by jewel  (8/21/2005 6:52:21 AM)

beautiful descriptive imagery....cadence could use a little work...but the last verse drove it home. well done.

How did I miss 


Written by MikeC16958  (10/20/2005 11:13:40 PM)

this gem? :-) Awesome, brilliant and cute, too all rolled into one! Peace and all good things!

sooo goood 

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Written by Lone Dreamer  (10/21/2005 12:25:12 AM)


i'll tell you wickedhart, this style of poetry is right up my alley. the message, and the rythym, were spot on. really nice work, i'm looking forward to reading more.

lone dreamer

sooo goood 


Written by Lone Dreamer  (10/21/2005 12:25:32 AM)


i'll tell you wickedhart, this style of poetry is right up my alley. the message, and the rythym, were spot on. really nice work, i'm looking forward to reading more.

lone dreamer

Awesome... 


Written by Unknown Member  (10/14/2008 1:17:04 PM)

Awesome!!!


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