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By John Templin on 08/25/2005
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great poem 

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Written by javajoe  (5/6/2007 8:29:14 PM)

like the small mole on cindy crawford's cheek... one would think "get rid of it" but then you think....
hey thats cool. Thats what I LIKE. remove the small piece and your perceptions fall apart.
anyway, I'm not exactly buying it that one cog controls everything, but the comparison or resemblance between the universe and ordinary people is dead on.

This poem is worth all 5 stars! 

Written by The girl with the thorn in her side  (5/10/2007 2:22:43 PM)

This is amazing! I was truly moved by this!

no slight to you, John 

Written by westcoastmama  (5/15/2007 11:01:12 PM)

Very nicely done...just refreshing the front page. ~Mary


Written by mommyof2  (5/27/2007 5:36:25 AM)

A great poem that makes you think outside of your own box.

Delightfully Simple 

Written by Davidjroth2002  (7/19/2007 4:52:44 PM)


I'm not the first to tell you what a delightful piece you've crafted here, and I'm seeing it almost two years after you posted it. Very well done. Thank you for sharing this splendid piece.


Written by infinitelycurious  (7/23/2007 10:49:47 AM)

beautifully written


Written by EssenceQueen  (7/23/2007 3:26:56 PM)


Written by lollybear  (7/31/2007 4:31:48 PM)

beautifully done. really well written. if only every one could understand that the universe could not be the same without them.


Written by GmaDeDe  (8/4/2007 4:51:32 PM)

You are very good. Your rhyme and rhythm are flawless, but I think you can do even better without rhyme. Go for it.


Written by spiderm49  (9/22/2007 12:54:34 PM)

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