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An Explanation To Haunting Eyes
By John Templin on 08/27/2005
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Haunting eyes 


Written by GmaDeDe  (8/27/2005 8:25:27 PM)

I would have preferred this be a personal essay. It says very much and has wonderful heart, but it really isn't wuited to the limerick meter.

 

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Written by John Templin  (8/29/2005 5:55:16 PM)

Thank you GmaDeDe for the kind advice. I've just made revissions that I hope will make it more acceptable. (John)

 


Written by Biggus  (12/21/2007 6:22:17 AM)


 


Written by f4egirl  (12/22/2007 4:45:59 PM)

deep peice

 


Written by godsangel  (5/17/2008 6:50:08 PM)

i think its poetry in its own way
good job

Every Child an Angel unaware 


Written by nsaynne  (7/8/2008 8:38:19 PM)

John, I stumbled on your work today and have spent some time reading your poems off and on throughout the day. This poem in particular touched me profoundly. My daughter's fiance is a newly minted police officer and while he loves his job, the one thing he has trouble dealing with is child abuse or neglect or anything awful having to do with kids. I can only imagine some of the children who people your dreams and wonder if there is any way you could cut yourself some slack? It seems you did all you could...I know that's cold comfort, but there's only so much you can do...I loved the poem, incidentally. nsaynne p.s. since I'm generally Latin illiterate, could you tell me what "Ad Maiorem Dei Gloriam" means? I'd appreciate knowing.


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