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Wonder
By GmaDeDe on 08/27/2005
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Written by semi_psychiatrist  (9/10/2005 10:44:59 AM)

Sometimes less material makes the poem mean more. But I thought this one needed more material. I wasn't bad at all but feels a little empty.

Good work! 


Written by sonataincminor  (10/23/2005 6:18:49 PM)

I tend to agree with semi-psychiatrist, you could do a lot with this poem. Doesn't need to be reams of words, but a little more exploration of the topic. It's such a good topic. And the poem so far is very good, good phrasing, good word choices. Thank you for posting it.


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