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What Pity
By sonataincminor on 09/06/2005
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Written by roseyposey  (9/23/2005 10:55:57 AM)

was a very nice piece - it had a Shakespearian feel about it, if you know what I mean.

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Written by jewel  (9/25/2005 3:05:20 AM)


Written by jewel  (9/25/2005 3:10:33 AM)

Sorry...hit that darn enter button too soon. Lets start again....Where do you get this inspiration???...I am so envious...your words and thoughts flow so effortlessly.....only one change I would consider in this perfect piece of poetry... in the last line...I would change swifltly to perhaps closely...but that is just my personal opinion. Shakespeare roll over is all I can say and if I could offer you more stars I would.

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Written by sonataincminor  (9/25/2005 8:23:33 PM)

Any comparison to Shakespeare is a good one. You make me blush. Thank you, Rose and Jewel. Thank you.


Written by wickedhart  (9/26/2005 9:14:26 AM)

That is really beautiful.


Written by dandycky26  (10/5/2005 10:36:28 PM)

Thank you 

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Written by sonataincminor  (10/13/2005 12:04:57 AM)

Thank you all for reading and taking the time to comment. Sonnets aren't normally my thing, but I'm very pleased you liked this. Thank you.

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