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What might have been?
By navymed05 on 09/06/2005
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Written by rockia  (9/14/2005 2:42:27 PM)

The poem seems to have alot of sentence that aren't clearly written as to want is meant or perhaps there typos but outside of those it seems pretty good
these are just a few of lines that don't make sense

there you was not know what
was to be and was not to be
You was you, and I me
I wish you was here

 

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Written by maggieb  (9/19/2005 2:55:44 PM)

you have a sound basis for a great poem, however this poem needs to be edited, edited, and shall we EDITED! Spellchecker is our friend.

 


Written by maggieb  (9/19/2005 2:56:49 PM)

Again, with most kind thoughts, edit.

 


Written by dandycky26  (10/13/2005 3:52:24 PM)

This poem has potential. You just need to use spell check because otherwise it sounds like lyrics to a really bad rap. Try to use words other than opposites, because they make you sound confused or something. It wasn't good but it was good. ;)


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