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I want it All
By navymed05 on 09/06/2005
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Written by Pilgrimage  (10/7/2005 8:32:44 AM)

it's 'nothing' instead of 'notthing'. Also, I think this could be improved with a bit more imagery. Right now, it's more a tell than a show. But with a little work, I think you could have a good poem here.

Nan

 


Written by dandycky26  (10/7/2005 8:37:49 AM)



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