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Whispered Seasons
By jewel on 09/08/2005
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Hi, Jewel 

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Written by sonataincminor  (9/11/2005 9:52:21 PM)

This is really delightful. Needs some punctuation. In the last stanza, if you'll replace the ? with a , it'll flow a bit easier. Ma'am, may I email you? It'll be two weeks, I'm off to New Orleans to help in the recovery there. But I'd like to, soon as I return. May I?

sonataincminor 

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Written by jewel  (9/12/2005 6:44:18 AM)

Thankyou for taking the time to review my poem and by all means email me anytime.

WOW... 

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Written by Seth  (9/28/2005 2:49:48 AM)

How lucky is the person that had something this wonderful written about them? I was just curious. I think you must have had one helluva good muse!! I enjoyed this very much. Thanks.


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