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Dying For You
By Angel Wings on 09/15/2005
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your poem 

Written by Eco_de_lluvia  (10/11/2005 9:53:42 PM)

It is difficult to say but I feel like there are too many clich├ęs in this poem. There are no real images in the poem either.


Written by dandycky26  (10/11/2005 10:44:58 PM)

he left you and is still worth all that?

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Written by sonataincminor  (10/12/2005 11:50:44 PM)

Your feelings certainly come across in this. On the poetic side, yeah, let's get more originality in there. Not just your words, but your created words. And the human side, nobody's love can prevent death. You have to find the strength within yourself to overcome and prevail. I think if you will write about that, you will not only feel better about yourself and about love, but you will have a winner of a poem.

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