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To You This is my Good-bye
By till loves end on 09/22/2005
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Written by till loves end  (9/28/2005 10:01:55 PM)

ok i know im on your sn but i don't wanna make one but girl you didn't tell me you were this good i love it
<3 nikki


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Written by jewel  (10/1/2005 4:59:06 PM)

Okay this is a good poem...very emotional thoughts and feelings...BUT 'the typos'... 'I can't stand to see you cry' not sand. and 'my shoulder' not my should. Typos distract the reader from enjoying and feeling your words and that is a shame because it is like I said a very good piece.


Written by sonataincminor  (10/12/2005 10:02:14 PM)

See, said I'd get to all of your poems... lol

I hope this poem was enough to gain some control, for what you are contemplating in this piece is not an effective solution to anything. It may change those who remain, but not for the better. Though you may think it would resolve some issues, it won't. It leaves them unresolved and full of destructive power.

You have ability, you write well, you could write extremely well. And there are those who need to hear you. Not just those you may think, but others out in the world, in similar situations. They need strength, and you have the power in your words and emotions to give them strength. Choose the better path.

nice expression of feeling 

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Written by popedogg  (10/16/2005 1:32:42 PM)

I could see the writer laying on the floor alone writing this
in very deep thought i like it
keep writing


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