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By till loves end on 09/22/2005
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Written by till loves end  (9/28/2005 10:04:45 PM)

you blew me away with this i think i might read it to my family to show them how i feel too i loe it
<3 nikki


Written by till loves end  (9/28/2005 10:05:03 PM)

Written by sonataincminor  (10/12/2005 9:56:29 PM)

Sarah, you write well. You have some important things to say. I can't answer your unspoken 'why', but I can hear you ask it. This poem is more than a teenage lament, it's a powerful piece.

Oh, there are some improvements you could make, but something tells me this poem is more about getting feelings out than it is about polishing the writing.

email me. Yeah, I'm an old man, probably older than your own parents. But I'm safe, and I'll listen.


Written by Lone Dreamer  (10/23/2005 9:16:06 AM)

Sarah, it's easy to see the talent that you possess, it comes through clearly in your writing.

I can relate with your message, in different ways. And I'm sure your family cares for you very much. Continue to put your thoughts down in writing, it will help you sort things out. Just know that many others share your same feelings, and that by you having the courage and wherewithall to express yourself, others will benefit in ways you may never even know.

And, I really enjoyed the ending. Sometimes it does feels like hope, is all we have left.

Keep up the great work!
Lone Dreamer

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