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Feelings Uncontrolled
By sunshinedust on 09/25/2005
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Written by phartinthewind  (10/25/2005 12:24:54 PM)

You have written about some strong feelings here. It seems to me like the poem might be a little stronger if you condensed it a little bit, rather than using so many words--just a suggestion.


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Written by Jon von Nottingham  (11/29/2006 6:54:25 PM)

thanks for sharing this. I enjoyed it. be well

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