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By maddie1305 on 09/29/2005
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Written by sonataincminor  (10/12/2005 10:46:44 PM)

Hi, Shasta.

Writing in all capital letters makes for difficult reading. In internet protocol, it's considered shouting, and while I'm pretty much ok with that, it really does make things hard to read and detracts from your poem.

If I were to make a suggestion about this poem, I would say that you should say why you're crying. Make this about you.

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