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Smoke(also posted in Undressing Room)
By westcoastmama on 09/29/2005
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Written by SilverFlame  (10/8/2005 11:09:00 AM)

this is so sultry, and erotic (but in a not-right-in-your-face way). Hot stuff - Amy

:-) Thanks, Amy. 

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Written by westcoastmama  (10/8/2005 11:20:20 PM)

Glad you liked. How are you, honey? Haven't seen you in a while.

I'm okay... 

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Written by SilverFlame  (10/9/2005 5:55:17 AM)

just drowning in work at the moment...and apparently it gets worse than this :(...I can't wait for the halfterm holiday :). How are you?

Yeah, I hear ya. 

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Written by westcoastmama  (10/9/2005 10:41:26 PM)

my son is a few months younger than you are. The senior year is hell for him, but he's determined. I'm alright, considering all that life is throwing at me. Don't stress too much.

one more time 

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Written by westcoastmama  (10/30/2005 6:02:37 PM)


Don't know how I missed this 

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Written by sonataincminor  (11/2/2005 11:33:43 PM)

the first time around. Must have been digging in the muck at the time. I like the eroticism of this, subtle and not overwhelming. Must be something wrong with this guy that thinks a smoke would outweigh the pleasure of you. So totally not a mistake I'd make... lol Good writing!!


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Written by westcoastmama  (11/3/2005 1:01:39 AM)

Thank you, John! You made my day.

I think I got a contact high? 

Written by Lone Dreamer  (11/4/2005 9:31:02 AM)

Yeah, who needs Mary Jane when they have an intoxicating elixar such as yourself?!

Must be reefer madness.

Thanks for the poem Westie.

Writing like this, is it's own euphoria.


Oh Dang! 

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Written by Lone Dreamer  (11/4/2005 9:38:27 AM)


I just realized on a review that you left on one of my posts, that your actual name is Mary!

When I wrote, "Who needs Mary Jane..." in my review of this poem of your's, the mary jane I was reffering to was the old slang term for marijuana...

I just didn't want there to be any confusion.

Take Care Mary, and again, great poem!
Richy :)


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Written by westcoastmama  (11/4/2005 11:31:02 AM)

Thanks Richy. Don't worry about it. I knew what you meant. Too funny anyway. Oh, btw, the little one is my niece, Ella. My kids can all powerlift me now being that they're all teenagers, almost. My daughter will be thirteen in January. Sheesh! Anyway, thanks again. ~Mary

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