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Smoke(also posted in Undressing Room)
By westcoastmama on 09/29/2005
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On stage... 

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Written by Evan  (11/6/2005 7:29:08 AM)

I'd love to see this performed on stage, it is so theatrical, visual.


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Written by westcoastmama  (11/6/2005 3:39:29 PM)

That would be soooo.... HOT!!

* tingly* 

Written by The girl with the thorn in her side  (11/8/2005 12:03:09 PM)

Wow, Mary. Wow. All I can really say at this moment. I may have to come back, and give you a longer review. This really turned me on, lol.


Written by Nightsongs  (11/8/2005 8:28:13 PM)

Very sensual and erotic. I enjoyed this very much.


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Written by westcoastmama  (11/9/2005 12:36:43 AM)

Once again, ladies, thank you so much for the kind words AND the stars! This is one of my favorites.


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Written by Mamastacia3  (11/12/2005 10:07:26 PM)

zowie, this one rocks!! Mmmm, yeah! p.s. nice pic! Omg, who knew you were such a knockout? :) All that AND a fabulous writer! -Stacia :)

Sensemilla is no substitute for sensuality 

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Written by kayakndan  (11/13/2005 11:50:59 AM)

I am reminded of a girl I used to sleep with long ago. Her boyfriend used to blunt up and handle a Playstation all day instead of her. She got fed up and looked elsewhere.
I used to sell it to him just to make sure!

Good poem, it sure brought back a grin to me.


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Written by westcoastmama  (11/13/2005 10:37:47 PM)

Thanks guys. "knock-out"? Me? heh, if you say so...I'm just glad you liked the poem. And, um, Dan...heh...good times, eh? Glad I could make you smile. This is one of my favorites. It came about because of a conversation my muse and I had. Uh-huh...talk about good times ;-) Thanks again!

I just realized 

Written by Mamastacia3  (11/16/2005 2:48:48 PM)

that I didn't star this yet....what was I thinking? And now it's back up to the top!! :) -Stacia :)


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Written by westcoastmama  (11/26/2005 8:36:21 PM)

Thanks Stacia! :-D

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