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By Klizz027 on 10/13/2005
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Hi, Katie 

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Written by sonataincminor  (10/23/2005 5:38:29 PM)

and welcome to moontown. You have a good poem here, though it does leave the reader wondering just what this awful secret could be. The last line needs some work, I think. Shorten it or make it more than one line. What happens is your reader runs out of breath before getting to the end of it. Would you consider changing it?

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