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False Love
By Klizz027 on 10/13/2005
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Very good!! 


Written by sonataincminor  (10/23/2005 5:43:45 PM)

Ok, the last line... seems too long... Could you make two lines out of it? The image 'sweet possession of deceit' is so good it deserves a line all its own. A very good poem, with a far deeper meaning than the surface of the words. Thank you for posting it, I hope to see more of your work soon.


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