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MY TEARS SAY WHAT I CAN'T
By till loves end on 10/23/2005
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Written by till loves end  (10/24/2005 8:24:19 PM)

how come you can't send to publishing with a certain amount of points!



Good writing! 

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Written by sonataincminor  (11/2/2005 11:30:00 PM)

Especially 'custom tomb', an excellent description. Got some overuse of the word 'so'. The image of tears being what you want to say is truly well done, especially the wiping away, nothing more to say.

As always, you have my best thoughts that things will turn around for you.

You'll have to ask the monitors about the points vs. contest submittal thing. In seriousness, this is a very good poem, and I understand it is a very personal poem, but it will still need some editing before submitting for professional review.


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