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As the light fades
By Nightsongs on 11/06/2005
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light fades 

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Written by jmalone  (11/6/2005 11:53:22 PM)

Very good flow to this sonnet with good rhythm.

Very good 


Written by sonataincminor  (11/20/2005 8:56:26 PM)

I read about aging in this, how we sometimes age in everyone else's eyes before we see it ourselves. I like the tone amd flow of this. Might eliminate some commas and replace some others with periods. Very good work.


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