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By Ethic-Inamorata on 11/15/2005
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Written by Mamastacia3  (11/16/2005 2:47:10 PM)

like the flow of this, the word combos, the unexpectedness.....but some of it just don't make sense to me! Please 'splain! Especially biting toes off with marbles and prickles of cattle......it sure sounds cool, but I just don't understand. I liked the image of knitting the sun to the moon.....-Stacia :)


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Written by Ethic-Inamorata  (11/16/2005 3:16:32 PM)

It isn't supposed to make logical sense. It's about exploration and having words/lexicon which doesn't fit the context. :o)


Written by dandycky26  (11/17/2005 10:03:08 AM)

well written, short and descriptive. i like this poem.


Written by sonataincminor  (11/20/2005 8:47:48 PM)

and very cool. Good images, nice word selections. I like the 'anything is possible' tone, twisted a bit to the dark side.

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