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Everyone is Watching
By BDDC on 12/07/2005
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Written by modestfairie  (12/8/2005 12:38:19 AM)

Your poem really grabs hold of the reader. I thought for a moment that your poem was written about my life. Good job!


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Written by german_terrier555  (12/8/2005 2:13:48 PM)

That was very well written, and i'm sure most people can relate to it. Well, I know I can.


Written by AngelsMommy1999  (12/9/2005 7:14:18 PM)

INTENSE is a good word for this one, good and INTENSE.......


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Written by AngelsMommy1999  (12/10/2005 3:43:12 PM)

this is angelsmommy1999, can you give me an example on how to fix the part you were talking about in Our Time Together, thank you for your help.....

i like it 

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Written by scarsnstories  (12/12/2005 2:22:29 PM)

this has a very mature sound and a lot of good use of literary devices. sometimes long poems lose my interest but this held my attetion to the end. nice work


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Written by scarsnstories  (12/12/2005 9:39:24 PM)


Written by jewel  (1/7/2006 7:21:46 AM)

Yes INTENSE is definitely the right word for this poem along with raw and powerful. Great Read! Excellent poem


Written by peabody2222  (5/5/2006 9:06:44 AM)

Emotion and passion


Written by mellienium  (5/24/2007 7:02:09 AM)

There is so much I like about this poem; how your voice draws up to that final outburst, almost rhythmically, and for it's fierce vulnerability. Nice.

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