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I hate my love for you
By Amelieone on 01/04/2006
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know the feeling but needs work 


Written by Platypus  (1/11/2006 3:26:37 AM)

dont know your age - but their is so much POTENTIAL here to work with

this fails to ENGAGE ME as an older reader -- feels far too simple for such complex emotions so use it for reference when you actually KNOW IF YOU WANT AN ANDIENCE & what age the may be --targetting is the difficulty of TRUELY sending a poem through the heart. take care Amelieon!! i am just very tough!! :-) i ask questions you can ask to really develop **


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