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I Fell Again
By dandycky26 on 01/15/2006
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Written by loverstail  (1/18/2006 5:51:20 PM)

you either lose interest in him because he never paid that much attention to you or you found different love.

Warm expressions 


Written by sonataincminor  (2/12/2006 10:24:01 PM)

But you are worth it, and though you might want him to think otherwise, you know you're worth it. That's the 'why you stopped' that you don't know. There's a line of confusion in this poem, between what you know and what you say to him. If you could divide that better by stanza, like a back and forth thing, I believe you'd have a stronger poem. I also think that if you'd add punctuation to your poems, you could do a lot more with your line breaks. I like very much the twice fallen aspect as you render it here. Wish some of those who had dumped me had done so as gently as you have in this poem. lol


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