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Phantom of my dreams
By karizmaticvoice on 01/22/2006
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Written by loverstail  (1/22/2006 8:35:22 AM)

you wish your dreams we're really like life.

 

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Written by Amelieone  (1/22/2006 2:33:50 PM)

I really like your poem a lot. However I think your poem would be a lot stronger if you omited the first two lines ("One night of passion that could never be,
gradually makes its way into my dreams."
)since they take away suspence.

Nice Poem 


Written by Maria  (1/24/2006 7:18:45 AM)

Hi. This is like a poem and a story. I could envision being there in that passion. I like the way you say you'll always find him in your dreams. I know those dreams. I liked your poem.

uh-huh... 

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Written by westcoastmama  (1/24/2006 3:33:55 PM)

I feel ya. Very nicely done. ~Mary

Thankyou 

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Written by karizmaticvoice  (1/25/2006 9:21:09 AM)

I thank everyone for your kind remarks. I am so glad you like this piece! As for cutting the first two lines I do believe you are totally right. Again I thank you all and really enjoyed sharing especially when the insperation was met here on this site! :)


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