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The Decline of Us
By wickedhart on 01/23/2006
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I can feel 

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Written by Jon von Nottingham  (1/23/2006 6:06:03 PM)

the frustration in this one. And I can relate. I was hoping to see more imagery and less question marks, maybe next time. Thanks for sharing. Jon

Hmmmmm..... 

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Written by jch_dark  (2/2/2006 7:32:49 AM)

A lot of great concepts but to me it reads like you are on a soap box yelling this out to anyone who will listen. Might want to take parts of it and work them into more complex lines or even adding lines to get a rhythm to it. Just a suggestion is all.

 


Written by evilangel18  (1/21/2008 9:45:50 PM)

It was good but it was like a long letter.


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