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We Have To Land Soon Dear
By Maria on 01/29/2006
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OMG, Maria 

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Written by westcoastmama  (1/30/2006 11:43:38 AM)

you're tearing my heart out.....*sigh*...this is just ....I'm speechless. ~Mary

Thank you, Mary 

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Written by Maria  (1/30/2006 12:15:14 PM)

that is so sweet of you to say.

dam --lucky you know i am --tough. 


Written by Platypus  (1/30/2006 7:01:24 PM)

it is a very soldi description of -- the other woman" syndrome -- use this diary style ( poetic too ) peice -- add some twist - AD PURE wicked amahination -- stupid tangents -- to use as an EXERCISE -- for "as we atlked about" OTHER subject matter -- me i should take more of my own advice --too -- lets twist this one -- maybe find -- gold under the spanish house :-) trun the KING size bed in to a COBRA :-) have fun -- lets both SMILE!!!

still i love the poem for its craft & my response to subject.

Thanks Platypus 

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Written by Maria  (1/31/2006 8:59:01 AM)



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