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Mist before Morning
By westcoastmama on 02/01/2006
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Written by jch_dark  (2/1/2006 10:01:55 PM)

Need to be seen in person to be believed, in the town where I was born they almost touched the ground. Beautiful poem. Sunrises are best when shared even when in stolen glances upon the one you love as they sleep.I think you could do some great variations on this with various lines.

Hey John. 

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Written by westcoastmama  (2/1/2006 10:35:48 PM)

Thanks for the crit and the stars. Any specific suggestions. I appreciate it. This was pretty much a cold post with only a couple of revisions. It literally only took 10 minutes to write just before I went to work. Thanks again. ~Mary

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Written by westcoastmama  (2/3/2006 4:00:33 PM)

just once

Mist 

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Written by jmalone  (2/3/2006 11:17:35 PM)

This has an angelic touch to it.

Hi John :-) 

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Written by westcoastmama  (2/3/2006 11:53:53 PM)

Yes it does, doesn't it. This one just made me feel good, even while I was writing it. Perhaps an angel was perched upon my shoulder as I wrote...eh? ~Mary


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