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REPOST: Not in the Stars
By MikeC16958 on 02/26/2006
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Written by Pilgrimage  (3/16/2006 3:18:25 PM)

this one is missing its rhythm, to me. When doing couplet/couplet/couplet you can get a bit boring without some kind of intricate rhythm to liven it up. But I have to admit I wish I'd written that line "battered by life, embarrassed by scars - "--that's a fantastic line.

Nan


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